Will you take a look at my story and tell me what you think?!

Question: Will you take a look at my story and tell me what you think?

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Please tell me what you think and what areas I need improvement on.

Answers:

Your story is definitely not worthy of publishing... It's worthy of being worshiped! Keep writing, please! Send it to me miniginga@live.co.uk... Wow

I really, really liked it :)

pretty good! : )

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