Do you like this poem then?!
Do you like this poem then?
I know a swanky truck-stop where tomato sauce is free!
I won't tell you exactly where, I don't want you to see!
Beans would bubble over and my sausage would be black!
Mushrooms would be mushy, and I would not go back!
I'll say no more about it, I've already said too much.
I hope I do not see you there, I couldn't face the rush!
Answers: I tried the swanky truck stop
They said the sauce was free
But when my meal was over
I was presented with a fee
The service,it was faulty
Meatloaf,it was bad
I'm thinking my experience
Is I have now been had Yes very good.... very good quite catchy really,. Cute but non sensical. Sounds more like you're just trying to find something to rhyme. If you wouldn't go back then how would you see anyone there or be part of the rush?
But it is cute though. Definitely worth a star. Well written and very catchy. Well done. x Yeah - it's good, but it's more of ditty than a poem - keep it up though - i enjoyed it! very good,i just hope you arent talking about the bed and breakfast which i occasionally manage,ha ha, luckily for us,we have had many compliments,otherwise i would be worried, the poem is great, at least it rhymes,some people on here write poems and it just sounds drab. well done:-) My mouth is watering but I'll tell you what my friend
I wouldn't eat no curry if I was at world's end
You can keep the chutney
and all that spicey shite
I'll just go to bed hungry
I know I'll live through the night Go on then - I'll give you a star.
8 out of 10 for content.......xxx I'll be honest with you Mud - no I don't like it.