I need you to clear this up for me?!
so what should i include in this?
im not too sure what to say and/or include.
thanks!
Answers: I'm getting the word out on a petition against KFC animals being treated cruelly inside the factories. and the school newspaper says they need a commentary.
so what should i include in this?
im not too sure what to say and/or include.
thanks!
I did a petition against KFC back when I was younger. The commentary is where you get to express how you feel and why you think people should sign the petition against KFC with you. I would high-lite the most important and inhuman topics. You cant really go all out and say every reason why you're against the cruel chicken fryers but the more horrifying the points you make are, the more attention you'll get from them. You could even throw in some pictures, but you don't want to gross anyone out too bad, Maybe a picture of where the chickens are kept, or a picture of them all cramped up in their too tiny cages. At the official KFC Cruelty website they use to have a section where you could actually print out petition templates they have already made that look very official. If you haven't checked out the site I would really suggest it, the PETA website has great info about the cruelty of KFC as well and they are more of well known organization that may help get peoples attention to see they are also against them. Hope this helps!
Is there proof such as witnesses and photos?
http://www.kfccruelty.com/
lots of info there
A commentary is an opinion piece. write your opinions just make sure you have the facts to back up your claim. I'm sure you have some facts, not just PITA propaganda.
there is a video (like that what help in a news paper)on the pita site.When you do this (depend on the grade level)dont tell them to stop eat chicken because it is very good for you.Search the internet for kfc picture and article you could take ideas from
Im glad someone get the word out ive stop eat chicken because of kfc they show the video on the news it was disturbing even those there it was terible quality
Just say your opinions but make sure you have facts and statistics to back them up/