Do you think this is a good way to start a speech on coca cola?!
Answers: "Where can you go to get a bottle of coca cola for 5cents? Back in the 19th century."
hell yeah.
but why on COCA COLA??
on how good it is to mix with whiskey and or vodka
do the sound effects and the movements of you drinking a coca cola
example: crack it open: shhhh...click
drinking : glug glug glug glug
after done: ahhhhhhh....
no..i think it's kinda lame..i like the direction but it just doesn't work..i agree with whoever said use the sound effects of opening one up or whatever...just write it better..hers were not so great..good luck..hope you find something that works..get the perfect start so your readers wanna go on..
Say back in the day coke used to have small amount of cocaine in it.
you should bring in a can or bottle of coca cola w/ u, & open & drink it too with your opening.
if someone made the sound effects of drinking a soda as the opener of a speech I would totally laugh out loud at them, and not in a good way. I like your opener, its actually pretty clever, stick with it