How would I describe this to put in my story?!
Ambrosia had a tacture of white zinfandel or champange!.Www@FoodAQ@Com
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What audience are you aiming this novel at!? Because today's style is to keep it simple!. Unless you're planning on having well educated people in their later years reading it!.
Today's standard is simple, short and informative!. Shakespear is out of date, which is what that sentence mimics!. So instead of trying to make your sentences sound elegant, keep it simple!.
Here's how I would write it:
Ambrosia was a curious substance!. Its texture was like that of champagne prickling at one's tongue!.Www@FoodAQ@Com
Today's standard is simple, short and informative!. Shakespear is out of date, which is what that sentence mimics!. So instead of trying to make your sentences sound elegant, keep it simple!.
Here's how I would write it:
Ambrosia was a curious substance!. Its texture was like that of champagne prickling at one's tongue!.Www@FoodAQ@Com
The closest thing I could find to the word "tacture" is "tactual" which means: of the sense or organs of touch; causing a sensation of touch!.
You could say "Ambrosia is like champagne on the tongue"Www@FoodAQ@Com
You could say "Ambrosia is like champagne on the tongue"Www@FoodAQ@Com
First you must define tacture - it's not a word that I have ever seen!.Www@FoodAQ@Com